Kronus
Is this sad 
I raped Sven
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Post by Kronus on Feb 23, 2009 13:18:56 GMT -5
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Parker
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Post by Parker on Feb 23, 2009 13:41:36 GMT -5
I think the top of his head is a little bright and his arm but the rest I really like tbh. Maybe a little more depth.Well done  |
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Sunjo
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Post by Sunjo on Feb 23, 2009 14:47:47 GMT -5
Too dark, lighting is more or less opposite, and the focal could use work.
Flow is alright, but overall this tag is rather boring.
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Kronus
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I raped Sven
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Post by Kronus on Feb 23, 2009 14:50:02 GMT -5
Too dark, lighting is more or less opposite, and the focal could use work. Flow is alright, but overall this tag is rather boring. It's really old. xD Like, right after mD. |
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Beebs
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I've grown tired of this mortal shell! *flies away*
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Post by Beebs on Feb 24, 2009 1:02:56 GMT -5
I didn't even realize that was an arm at first. xDD It's kind of ironic that the lighting, which was given a lot of attention, conflicts with the stock's natural lighting, from the looks of it. Some of the clip masking of C4D effects and BG directly left of the stock (from outside POV) stands out a little too much, is just a bit too round, and ends up not providing a positive effect. I don't see much evidence of intentional flow, it just seems like your eyes are drawn to the stock, because it's the only thing there to look at. So I agree with Sunjo, it's a little boring. I like what's going on with the effect atop the shirt, but other than that not too eye-pleasing for my tastes. But luckily no need to take that to heart, since it's older.  |
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