XeroCint
Is this sad 
Just enjoy it.
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Post by XeroCint on Apr 15, 2009 9:59:27 GMT -5
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Alusion`
Is this sad 
The Feared, The Devastator
The World Stops When I Design and The Seconds Speed Up
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Post by Alusion` on Apr 15, 2009 14:35:04 GMT -5
Whoa, this story is pretty incredible.
Did you write this?
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XeroCint
Is this sad
Just enjoy it.
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Post by XeroCint on Apr 15, 2009 15:08:54 GMT -5
Yeah, working on chapter two. Writer's block though  |
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Spaz
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Unique personal text goes here...
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Post by Spaz on Apr 15, 2009 23:04:02 GMT -5
Great so far. Can't wait to read more of it.  |
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Sven
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Is THIS attractive IRL
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Post by Sven on Apr 16, 2009 4:06:05 GMT -5
You are way to descriptive in what you write. WAAAY too descriptive. I know you may like it to get your mental picture across the best, but you have allow for the reader's interpretation to allow for maximum enjoyment on their behalf, thats always why the book is better than the movie  |
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XeroCint
Is this sad
Just enjoy it.
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Post by XeroCint on Apr 16, 2009 9:24:28 GMT -5
I got less descriptive in chapter 2
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Sven
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Is THIS attractive IRL
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Post by Sven on Apr 17, 2009 4:16:13 GMT -5
I've yet to read Chap 2 |
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XeroCint
Is this sad
Just enjoy it.
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Post by XeroCint on Apr 17, 2009 11:14:56 GMT -5
Well, you see sir, that might just be your problem lol |
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